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Date: Mon, 13 May 2002 23:21:25 +0200 (CEST)
From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
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Subject: In section 2.9.7 of the Handbook "screen saver" should be used instead of "screensaver"
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>Number:         38053
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       In section 2.9.7 of the Handbook "screen saver" should be used instead of "screensaver"
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon May 13 14:30:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:    Tue May 14 12:25:50 PDT 2002
>Last-Modified:  Tue May 14 12:25:50 PDT 2002
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386


	
>Description:
In section 2.9.7 of the Handbook "screen saver" should be used instead
of "screensaver" as it's done in Sysinstall. Read the patch below for
more details.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
	

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org	Mon May 13 23:13:13 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Mon May 13 23:14:36 2002
@@ -3411,12 +3411,12 @@
 	</mediaobject>
       </figure>
 
-      <para>A commonly used option is the screensaver.  Use the arrow keys
+      <para>A commonly used option is the screen saver.  Use the arrow keys
 	to select <guimenuitem>Saver</guimenuitem> and then press
 	<keycap>Enter</keycap>.</para>
 
       <figure id="saver-select">
-	<title>Screensaver Options</title>
+	<title>Screen Saver Options</title>
 
 	<mediaobject>
 	  <imageobject>
@@ -3431,12 +3431,12 @@
 
       <para>The default time interval is 300 seconds.  To change the time
 	interval, select <guimenuitem>Saver</guimenuitem> again.  At the
-	Screensaver Options menu, select <guimenuitem>Timeout</guimenuitem>
+	Screen Saver Options menu, select <guimenuitem>Timeout</guimenuitem>
 	using the arrow keys and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>.  A pop-up
 	menu will appear:</para>
 
       <figure id="saver-timeout">
-	<title>Screensaver Timeout</title>
+	<title>Screen Saver Timeout</title>
 
 	<mediaobject>
 	  <imageobject>
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Tue May 14 12:25:24 PDT 2002 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed with no problem!  Thanks for the submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=38053 
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