From tux@server.t-hosting.hu Mon Nov 6 17:58:31 2006 Return-Path: Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8377E16A4AB; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 17:58:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from tux@server.t-hosting.hu) Received: from server.t-hosting.hu (server.t-hosting.hu [217.20.133.7]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0C51943D49; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 17:58:30 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from tux@server.t-hosting.hu) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by server.t-hosting.hu (Postfix) with ESMTP id 68C109A0F7F; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:58:19 +0100 (CET) Received: from server.t-hosting.hu ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (server.t-hosting.hu [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id 8p3OcOWwILoZ; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:58:19 +0100 (CET) Received: by server.t-hosting.hu (Postfix, from userid 1001) id 4064A9A0DCD; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:58:19 +0100 (CET) Message-Id: <20061106175819.4064A9A0DCD@server.t-hosting.hu> Date: Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:58:19 +0100 (CET) From: Gabor Kovesdan Reply-To: Gabor Kovesdan To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Gabor Kovesdam Subject: [patch] www/en/about.sgml - improve grammar X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 105216 >Category: www >Synopsis: [patch] www/en/about.sgml - improve grammar >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: danger >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon Nov 06 18:00:55 GMT 2006 >Closed-Date: Tue Nov 07 17:01:55 GMT 2006 >Last-Modified: Tue Nov 07 17:01:55 GMT 2006 >Originator: Gabor Kovesdan >Release: FreeBSD 6.1-RELEASE-p3 amd64 >Organization: n/a >Environment: >Description: - "is" sounds weird with "these", "are" is better in this case >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- about.sgml.diff begins here --- Index: www/en/about.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /usr/cvs/www/en/about.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.10 diff -u -r1.10 about.sgml --- www/en/about.sgml 12 Oct 2006 09:21:19 -0000 1.10 +++ www/en/about.sgml 6 Nov 2006 17:22:32 -0000 @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ including CD-ROM, DVD-ROM, floppy disk, magnetic tape, an MS-DOS® partition, or if you have a network connection, you can install it directly over - anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need is + anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need are these directions.

--- about.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-www->danger Responsible-Changed-By: danger Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Nov 6 19:27:04 UTC 2006 Responsible-Changed-Why: Take http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=105216 From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: www/105216: commit references a PR Date: Tue, 7 Nov 2006 16:54:40 +0000 (UTC) danger 2006-11-07 16:54:31 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en about.sgml Log: - improve grammar - double space after full stop Submitted by: gabor Approved by: keramida (mentor), trhodes (mentor) PR: www/105216 Revision Changes Path 1.11 +2 -2 www/en/about.sgml _______________________________________________ cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: danger State-Changed-When: Tue Nov 7 17:01:17 UTC 2006 State-Changed-Why: Committed with one minor nit - double space after full stop. Anyway, thank you very much for your report! http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=105216 >Unformatted: