From adamw@FreeBSD.org Sat Mar 10 14:23:37 2007 Return-Path: Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 04C2C16A400 for ; Sat, 10 Mar 2007 14:23:37 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from adamw@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DB03913C4A5; Sat, 10 Mar 2007 14:23:36 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from adamw@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (adamw@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l2AENaNq035136; Sat, 10 Mar 2007 14:23:36 GMT (envelope-from adamw@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from adamw@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l2AENacL035135; Sat, 10 Mar 2007 14:23:36 GMT (envelope-from adamw) Message-Id: <200703101423.l2AENacL035135@freefall.freebsd.org> Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2007 14:23:36 GMT From: Adam Weinberger Reply-To: Adam Weinberger To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Oleg Minaev Subject: string tweaks for the GNOME front page X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 110154 >Category: www >Synopsis: string tweaks for the GNOME front page >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: gnome >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: change-request >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Mar 10 14:30:04 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: Sun Mar 11 06:30:41 GMT 2007 >Last-Modified: Sun Mar 11 06:40:03 GMT 2007 >Originator: Adam Weinberger >Release: FreeBSD 6.0-STABLE i386 >Organization: TACOS >Environment: System: FreeBSD freefall.freebsd.org 6.0-STABLE FreeBSD 6.0-STABLE #0: Sat Dec 10 03:18:20 UTC 2005 kensmith@freefall.freebsd.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/FREEFALL i386 >Description: This patch changes a couple items on the first page. I've made a jillion edits to the "What is GNOME?" section over time, and I'm still not totally happy with it. This version focuses a bit more on what having GNOME means to the user. The current text talks about GNOME from a design standpoint, but my proposed text is a little more towards the answer to "what will GNOME do for me?" Also, I've changed "committers" to "developers" because you guys do much more development than committing. Also because most n00bs have no idea what a "committer" is. Also, Oleg Minaev wrote an email to freebsd-gnome@ questioning the line "Simple solutions to build problems - quickly!" and frankly, I agree with him. That was always an awkward line, but it hadn't occurred to me before how much it looks like it's offering tools to help build a problem. My patch changes that line to "One stop solution shop!" >How-To-Repeat: Put the lime in the coconut. >Fix: --- frontpage.patch begins here --- Index: index.xsl =================================================================== RCS file: /home/dcvs/www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v retrieving revision 1.90 diff -u -d -p -r1.90 index.xsl --- index.xsl 14 Oct 2006 16:36:13 -0000 1.90 +++ index.xsl 10 Mar 2007 14:14:39 -0000 @@ -104,15 +104,19 @@ everything is easy to use, attractive, powerful, and works the way you expect.

-

The major components of GNOME are the - GNOME desktop, a - straightforward window-based desktop environment, and the +

The + GNOME desktop is a + window-based desktop environment that provides many + business, productivity, and entertainment + applications, and makes non-GNOME programs faster and + easier to run. The GNOME development - platform, a collection of application-development - tools and libraries.

+ platform is a collection of application-development + tools and libraries used by many programs, such as + Mozilla Firefox.

The FreeBSD GNOME Project is a team of devoted - committers and users that manage the integration + developers and users that manage the integration of GNOME and FreeBSD.

Upgrading to GNOME 2.16?

@@ -128,7 +132,7 @@ Most of GNOME has been ported to FreeBSD, but there is still plenty left to be done!

-

Simple solutions to build problems - quickly!

+

One stop solution shop!

GNOME is simple and easy to build using the FreeBSD ports system, but sometimes things simply go wrong. If GNOME -- or anything that uses --- frontpage.patch ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-www->gnome Responsible-Changed-By: adamw Responsible-Changed-When: Sat Mar 10 14:33:53 UTC 2007 Responsible-Changed-Why: Assign to the good folk at the FreeBSD GNOME headquarters. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=110154 State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: marcus State-Changed-When: Sun Mar 11 06:30:28 UTC 2007 State-Changed-Why: Committed, thanks! http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=110154 From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service) To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Cc: Subject: Re: www/110154: commit references a PR Date: Sun, 11 Mar 2007 06:30:29 +0000 (UTC) marcus 2007-03-11 06:30:24 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en/gnome index.xsl Log: Forced commit to note that the previous commit was part of a PR. PR: 110154 Revision Changes Path 1.92 +1 -1 www/en/gnome/index.xsl _______________________________________________ cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >Unformatted: