From danger@rulez.sk Sun Jul 3 17:09:26 2005 Return-Path: Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0B21216A41C for ; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 17:09:26 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from danger@rulez.sk) Received: from mail.rulez.sk (DaEmoN.RuLeZ.sK [84.16.32.226]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C0AAB43D4C for ; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 17:09:25 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from danger@rulez.sk) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.rulez.sk (Postfix) with ESMTP id 37ADE1CD50 for ; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 19:09:24 +0200 (CEST) Received: by mail.rulez.sk (Postfix, from userid 1001) id E992A1CD4C; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 19:09:20 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <20050703170920.E992A1CD4C@mail.rulez.sk> Date: Sun, 3 Jul 2005 19:09:20 +0200 (CEST) From: Daniel Gerzo Reply-To: Daniel Gerzo To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 X-GNATS-Notify: >Number: 82935 >Category: www >Synopsis: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: keramida >State: closed >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 03 17:10:09 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: Mon Jul 04 10:39:03 GMT 2005 >Last-Modified: Mon Jul 04 10:39:03 GMT 2005 >Originator: Daniel Gerzo >Release: FreeBSD 5.4 i386 >Organization: rulez.sk >Environment: System: FreeBSD daemon.rulez.sk #2: Fri May 27 23:16:31 CEST 2005 danger@daemon.rulez.sk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/daemon i386 >Description: The doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.sgml doesn't use proper english. I have also included little update for this article. >How-To-Repeat: check out: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.html >Fix: --- article.sgml.diff begins here --- --- article.sgml.orig Sun Jul 3 16:59:50 2005 +++ article.sgml Sun Jul 3 18:58:39 2005 @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@ The &os; Laptop Compatibility List. - For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out - the &a.mobile.name; list. + If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users, + checkout the &a.mobile.name; list. You can also get additional + information about using Laptops on &os; at + + http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html. &xorg; --- article.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Daniel Gerzo Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 01:30:02 +0300 On 2005-07-03 19:09, Daniel Gerzo wrote: > --- article.sgml.diff begins here --- > --- article.sgml.orig Sun Jul 3 16:59:50 2005 > +++ article.sgml Sun Jul 3 18:58:39 2005 > @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@ > The &os; > Laptop Compatibility List. > > - For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out > - the &a.mobile.name; list. > + If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users, > + checkout the &a.mobile.name; list. You can also get additional > + information about using Laptops on &os; at > + > + http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html. Nice diff. I only have a minor comment. When the content of a element is just the URL itself, it's probably better to leave the content of the element empty -- the stylesheets will take care of duplicating the URL in the generated link, i.e.: This doesn't duplicate the URL, making it double the effort to switch to a different URL and twice as error-prone (i.e. update one but forget the other). If this looks ok to the rest of the -www people, I can commit it with this minor change to the diff :-) - Giorgos From: Ceri Davies To: Giorgos Keramidas Cc: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 00:04:03 +0100 --f+W+jCU1fRNres8c Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sun, Jul 03, 2005 at 10:30:20PM +0000, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > The following reply was made to PR www/82935; it has been noted by GNATS. >=20 > From: Giorgos Keramidas > To: Daniel Gerzo > Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org > Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops arti= cle > Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 01:30:02 +0300 >=20 > On 2005-07-03 19:09, Daniel Gerzo wrote: > > --- article.sgml.diff begins here --- > > --- article.sgml.orig Sun Jul 3 16:59:50 2005 > > +++ article.sgml Sun Jul 3 18:58:39 2005 > > @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@ > > The &= os; > > Laptop Compatibility List. > > =20 > > - For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out > > - the &a.mobile.name; list. > > + If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users, > > + checkout the &a.mobile.name; list. You can also get additional > > + information about using Laptops on &os; at > > + > > + http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html. > =20 > Nice diff. I only have a minor comment. When the content of a > element is just the URL itself, it's probably better to leave the > content of the element empty -- the stylesheets will take care of > duplicating the URL in the generated link, i.e.: > =20 > > =20 > This doesn't duplicate the URL, making it double the effort to switch to > a different URL and twice as error-prone (i.e. update one but forget the > other). > =20 > If this looks ok to the rest of the -www people, I can commit it with > this minor change to the diff :-) I'm happy with this, although "check out" is more correct than "checkout". Ceri --=20 Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former. -- Einstein (attrib.) --f+W+jCU1fRNres8c Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.1 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFCyG7jocfcwTS3JF8RAplKAJ0fJ01lX+yO47Nb3VD3Te+7J2SDCwCgoVez pa6BraQc06nOLb3kl8k90vY= =hl70 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --f+W+jCU1fRNres8c-- State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: keramida State-Changed-When: Mon Jul 4 10:38:38 GMT 2005 State-Changed-Why: Committed. Thanks :) Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-www->keramida Responsible-Changed-By: keramida Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Jul 4 10:38:38 GMT 2005 Responsible-Changed-Why: http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=82935 >Unformatted: